The first thing that I see when I read the compositions was that the ideas that I expose in the email to teacher were not clear and structured. If i compare the structure, the structure of the first composition was so bad but in the last post, I estructured the information in four paragraphs to separate the different ideas.
Another difference betwen the two texts was the vocabulary, reading them I can see that I learned a lot of words and expressions. Also I have to consider that in the email, I used a lot of help with the dictionary but in the last post I only have to use the diccionary to search one word: "queixar-se" that it is called in English : complain.
If I compare my first oral presentation and my last one, I can see some differences. Firstly, the fluency had improved a lot, maybe it is because the issue of the last presentation was the Research Project and I knowed with a lot of details what I have to explain. Others differences are the vocabulary, and my movements, both things are improved in the last presentation.
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